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I hear the delicate pounds on my window;
Like hundred of miniature fists,
Knocking to get in;
So gently;
Each graceful pound;
Giving me one more burst of enjoyment;
I hear your gentle voice;
Asking to be let in.
I can't.
They don't want you.
But I always will different.
I'll always care.
Every time I hear you're yearning.
I'll stare regretfully.
You aren't accepted here...
Goodbye, rain...
©2008-2009 ~mindeater34
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Author's Comments

D: I'm not in love with rain...I'm just bored...And I wanted to write something...And it keeps raining...D: It's been raining for days....

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:iconaoigetsuhana:
OHMAHGOD! SIR UR SO GOOD! Like 9000 times better than me11!!

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HI.
Want to talk to me about Napoleon?
:iconmindeater34:
Yes~ I'm aware of the fact I'm better than you....
I'm OVER 9000 times better than you, miss~


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MISA MISA HAPPY!!!11one!!
:iconaoigetsuhana:
You certainly are, miss! You're a genius! The poem you wrote was amaaaaazing!!

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HI.
Want to talk to me about Napoleon?
:iconmindeater34:
thanx!!!

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MISA MISA HAPPY!!!11one!!
:iconaoigetsuhana:
Seriously, the person who wrote this is a GENIUS!

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HI.
Want to talk to me about Napoleon?
:iconx-kogikun-x:
o.o its really good
:iconmindeater34:
Nuh-uh....
D:
Really...

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MISA MISA HAPPY!!!11one!!
:iconx-kogikun-x:
kogi cant tell if ur being sarcastic or not O.o
:iconmindeater34:
On what...? Oh that...
Yeah, I don't think it's good... D:

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MISA MISA HAPPY!!!11one!!

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